Re: [Rdo-list] RDO bookmarks - Feedback requested

On 02/27/2015 05:32 PM, Rich Bowen wrote: > Thanks again for your helpful feedback. I've got another iteration at > the same place - > https://openstack.redhat.com/images/bookmark/rdo_bookmark.odt - that > addresses these comments. Nit picking time... "Uploading a new image openstack image create <name> \" openstack image.. should be aligned. All other commands have a alignment. "Create network:" There is one space missing before "[--share..]". At the moment the alignment of "[--enable..]" and "[--share..]" is different. "Get started.. sudo packstack –allinone" This should be --allinone. I think LibreOffice automatically changes "--" to "-". "Start a new instance:" The alignment of "--flavor" and "--image" differs. One space before "--flavor" should be removed. One more point: The alignment of the arguments here differs from the alignment of the argument of the "Migrate an instance to a different host" command. This should be fixed. "Booting an instance from a volume" "dev_name" should be changed to "dev-name" or "device-name". Same for "Attach a volume to an instance". "Create network" Use "network-name" instead of "network_name". "Managing Networks" should be changed to "Managing networks". The other titles are "Managing instances" and "Managing volumes". Christian. _______________________________________________ Rdo-list mailing list Rdo-list(a)redhat.com https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/rdo-list To unsubscribe: rdo-list-unsubscribe(a)redhat.com