[Rdo-list] RDO bookmarks - Feedback requested

[Rich Bowen]

Thanks!

On 03/02/2015 04:56 AM, Christian Berendt wrote:
> On 02/27/2015 05:32 PM, Rich Bowen wrote:
>> Thanks again for your helpful feedback. I've got another iteration at
>> the same place -
>> https://openstack.redhat.com/images/bookmark/rdo_bookmark.odt - that
>> addresses these comments.
>
> Nit picking time...
>
> "Uploading a new image
>
> openstack image create <name> \"
>
> openstack image.. should be aligned. All other commands have a alignment.
>
> "Create network:"
>
> There is one space missing before "[--share..]". At the moment the
> alignment of "[--enable..]" and "[--share..]" is different.
>
> "Get started..
>
> sudo packstack –allinone"
>
> This should be --allinone. I think LibreOffice automatically changes
> "--" to "-".
>
> "Start a new instance:"
>
> The alignment of "--flavor" and "--image" differs. One space before
> "--flavor" should be removed.
>
> One more point: The alignment of the arguments here differs from the
> alignment of the argument of the "Migrate an instance to a different
> host" command. This should be fixed.
>
> "Booting an instance from a volume"
>
> "dev_name" should be changed to "dev-name" or "device-name". Same for
> "Attach a volume to an instance".
>
> "Create network"
>
> Use "network-name" instead of "network_name".
>
> "Managing Networks" should be changed to "Managing networks". The other
> titles are "Managing instances" and "Managing volumes".
>
> Christian.
>
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